Question

 

Lily 和Lucy 一樣高，Lucy比Lily外向，但是Lily比Lucy學(xué)習(xí)用功, Lucy比Lily聰明。

Lily 和Lucy都很健康，因?yàn)樗齻兠刻於煎憻�，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且從不吃垃圾食品�?/p>

上個(gè)周六，她們和同學(xué)們一起騎車去人民公園（the People’s Park）玩了，上午劃船，下午做游戲，玩得很開心。

Lucy and Lily are my classmates. They are twin sisters.____________________

 

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【答案】

 

Lucy and Lily are twins. They look exactly the same. They both like to go shopping and have a nice afternoon tea. They also share the same interest of watching movie together. Despite their similarities, they have different looks and personality. Lily has short curly hair, and Lucy has long straight hair. Lily is a huge fan of bike-riding, so she is a really outgoing person. In contrast, Lucy enjoys reading and play violin. She is really quiet. But, everyone has to admit that they are beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問題。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文所用句式較為簡(jiǎn)單，但是由于作者敘述順序的巧妙安排，加上一些連詞和短語的使用，如：so，因此……；in contrast與此相反，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。