Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)圍繞怎么保持健康，怎么預(yù)防流感（How to Keep Healthy，How to Prevent the Flu)等話題為主題，寫(xiě)一篇80個(gè)詞左右的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Healthy

As we know, health is important to us. How should we keep healthy?

First, we should have a good eating habit. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day. We can’t eat too much or too little. Drinking enough water is a good habit. Second, we had better go to bed early. We shouldn’t stay up late at night. Third, exercising a lot is good for us. Don’t throw litter about.

If we try to do that, we will be in a good health.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是圍繞健康展開(kāi)敘述，首先應(yīng)該說(shuō)明健康的重要性，然后，分別敘述如何才能保持健康。最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召大家保持健康。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，本文的主語(yǔ)主要為第一人稱(chēng)復(fù)數(shù)人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。為了使邏輯顯得更加清楚,適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞.

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本書(shū)面表達(dá)的中心是如何才能保持健康，所以作者緊緊圍繞題目的提示進(jìn)行書(shū)寫(xiě)。注重了表述的邏輯性和條理性。文章中First, Second, Third,的運(yùn)用，使語(yǔ)句更加通順，連貫。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用非常準(zhǔn)確，且做到了主謂一致，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后一句運(yùn)用了復(fù)合句：If we try to do that, we will be in a good health.加深了主題。