Question

【題目】根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：60---80詞左右；（15分）

現(xiàn)在的科技日新月異，各種發(fā)明以及高科技產(chǎn)品成為了我們生活中不可缺少的東西，如電腦、筆記本電腦(laptop)、手機(mobile phone)、MP4、數(shù)碼相機(digital camera)、數(shù)碼攝影機(DV)等。請以My favorite invention為題描述你最喜歡的一種發(fā)明，并說明理由(理由至少有兩個方面)。

My Favorite Invention

Answer 1

【答案】

My Favorite Invention

Among all the modern inventions, the laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work,study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達，寫作的話題為我最喜歡的發(fā)明，具體內(nèi)容包括發(fā)明的種類，我最喜歡的類別，喜歡此類發(fā)明的原因，此類發(fā)明物發(fā)明的時間，以及對于我們生活的改變，以及對我自身的價值和意義，在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，同時應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達用語，如，With a laptop，A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop等。