Question

4．某英文報以An Unforgettable Day （《難忘的一天》） 為題，面向中學生開展征文活動，請你寫一篇短文參加此次活動．
內容包括：
1哪一天讓你感到難忘；
2什么事（開心的、傷心的或是有特別意義的，…）讓你感到那天難忘；
3那一天你經歷了什么；
4那天的經歷對你有什么影響或者你有什么感受．
要求：80-100 詞；文中不得出現真實姓名及校名．
An Unforgettable Day
I'll never forget June 11^th，2012．
It was a sunnyday．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject．
After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party．
I'll never forget that day．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，要求根據自己的回憶寫一篇敘事性短文，記述自己難忘的一天和一件事情．動筆前先要認真閱讀寫作提示，注意從四個方面進行敘述．1哪一天讓你感到難忘；
2什么事（開心的、傷心的或是有特別意義的，…）讓你感到那天難忘；
3那一天你經歷了什么；
4那天的經歷對你有什么影響或者你有什么感受
由于是回憶性短文，故用過去時態(tài)較多，主要用第一人稱．
重點短語和句型：
on the way to去某地的路上
what's worse更糟糕的是
it is the first time to do sth第一次去做某事

解答 答案：
An Unforgettable Day
I'll never forget June 11^th，2012．（難忘的那一天）
It was a sunny day．On the way to school，my friend did something rude to me．It made me sad．What's worse，I got a"C"in my favorite subject（高分句型）．After school，I went home unhappily．It was dark in the room．Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song"Happy birthday"．I was surprised to see many people and a big cake．"Oh，it's my birthday．"（難忘的事情和經歷）I was so excited and happy．It was my first time to have a birthday party（高分句型）．（影響和感受）
I'll never forget that day．（總結全文，點題）

點評 本題是考查書面表達能力，在平時的學習中要加強寫作的訓練，達到熟練運用的目的，書寫工整，語法準確，過渡自然連貫．寫作中選取自己比較熟悉的內容寫，注意適當使用連詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系，不要犯語法書寫的低級錯誤．