Question

11．Daniel 是一名富有愛心，愛好廣泛的學(xué)生．請你根據(jù)以下信息，以"My friend"為題寫一篇短文介紹他．要求：語句通順，要點齊全，不少于90詞．

Personal information	14歲，八年級九班學(xué)生
Favourite season	喜歡冬天，在冬天堆雪人，和朋友互相打雪仗
Hobbies	對各種植物，動物和鳥類感興趣，是觀鳥協(xié)會的成員，想了解各種各樣的鳥，每年去濕地觀鳥，記錄它們種類和數(shù)量的變化
Favourite animal	最喜歡大熊貓，但是大熊貓?zhí)幱谖ｋU中，他認為…（列舉兩條保護措施）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
His favorite season is winter，because he can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with his friends．
句中"because he can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with his friends"為原因狀語從句．句中短語有"make a snowman 堆雪人"、"have a snowball fight  打雪仗"．這句話意為：他最喜歡冬天，因為他可以和朋友堆雪人、打雪仗．
高分句型二：
He think the government should make laws to protect them．
句中"the government should make laws to protect them"為賓語從句．"make laws"意為"制定法律"．這句話意為：他認為政府部門應(yīng)該制定法律保護它們．

解答 My friend
Daniel is my friend．He is very nice．Let me introduce him to you．（開篇點題）
He is fourteen years old．And he is in Grade eight，Class nine．His favorite season is winter，because he can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with his friends．【高分句型一】He is interested in plants，animals and birds．He is a member of Birdwatching Association．He wants to know about all kinds of birds．He goes to the wetland every year to watch the birds and record the changes in their species and numbers．Of all the animals，he likes pandas best．However，they are in danger．He think the government should make laws to protect them．【高分句型二】What's more，we can learn how to take care of them．（介紹我的朋友）
This is my friend．What about yours？（總結(jié)）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．