Question

18．假設(shè)你發(fā)現(xiàn)同學(xué)有抄作業(yè)現(xiàn)象，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇題為"Stop copying others'homework"的短文刊登在英語學(xué)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)報上．

原因	作業(yè)太多，難度較大
	花太多時間于玩游戲或網(wǎng)上聊天
結(jié)果	考試不及格
	對學(xué)習(xí)失去信心
建議	對需要完成的作業(yè)列個單子
	你的建議（至少兩點）

注意：1短文須包括所有要點，但不要逐字翻譯；可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫．
2詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Stop copying others'homework，please
Every day some of my classmates like copying others'homework．                                   

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think①it is helpful for us to make a list of the things ②we need to do ③so that we can learn to organize our time better我認(rèn)為將我們需要做的事情列舉出來是有幫助的，那樣我們能學(xué)會更好的安排時間．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②we need是省略了that的定語從句．
③so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
And we can also ask our teachers for advice if we meet problems如果我們遇見問題我們也能找老師給建議．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．

解答 Stop copying others'homework
Every day some of my classmates like copying others'homework．There are many reasons．Some students find there is too much homework and it is a bit difficult，so they have great difficulty finishing it on time．Others spend so much time playing computer games and chatting on the Internet that they have no time for the homework（原因）．As a result，they often fail the exams and some even lose interest in study．（結(jié)果）
     I think it is helpful for us to make a list of the things we need to do so that we can learn to organize our time better．【高分句型一】Besides，we should focus more on our study instead of playing computer games．And we can also ask our teachers for advice if we meet problems【高分句型二】．（建議）

點評 做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤．