Question

【題目】下面是大明寫給他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的煩惱。請你以他的朋友Tom的身份，給他寫一封80詞左右的回信，在信中指出他的問題并給他提出建議。信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Tom,

My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?

Yours,

Daming

Dear Daming,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Daming,

I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.

Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry.

I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。