Question

2．話(huà)題作文：即將到來(lái)的假期，你打算怎樣度過(guò)呢？是去旅游，去放松玩樂(lè)還是去做一些其它有意義的事情？請(qǐng)以"Doing Something ________ in Summer Holiday"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ�（提示：先將題目補(bǔ)充完整，可用meaningful，relaxing，interesting等．）

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話(huà)題作文，內(nèi)容是你打算怎樣度過(guò)暑假，要把你在暑假要做的主要事情當(dāng)作寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)，側(cè)重于how一詞．行文時(shí)，要先把題目補(bǔ)充完整，可用meaningful，relaxing，interesting等．人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)I，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來(lái)時(shí)，根據(jù)句子需要也可使用少量的其他時(shí)態(tài)，這樣可以顯得文章不單調(diào)．

解答 參考范文：
                       Doing Something Meaningful in Summer Holiday
   It's important to do something meaningful in summer holiday．
   I can do many things to help others as well as to improve myself．Maybe I can work as a volunteer to help more people．For example I can go to see old people in old people's home．It will be a wonderful thing if I talk with them and bring laugher to them．Of course，I will meet many new people and make friends with them during my meaningful holidays．Besides，I can read some books to open my mind and learn some new things at the same time．All the good and meaningful things I've done in the holiday can make me a better person．
   Make a good plan for your summer holiday and do something meaningful．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此為話(huà)題作文，首先要仔細(xì)審題，抓住文章的重點(diǎn)，把所要求寫(xiě)的信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來(lái)．要求語(yǔ)句通順，單詞，語(yǔ)法和時(shí)態(tài)正確，盡量采用多種句式，避免文章過(guò)于單調(diào)．