Question

書面表達(dá)(本題滿分20分)

假如你是陽光中學(xué)的李華，即將要畢業(yè)的你，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)和生活了三年的母校充滿了眷戀和感恩，想在當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)刊上發(fā)表一篇英語文章描述自己的母校。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文。

學(xué)校	①優(yōu)美的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境。 ②現(xiàn)代化的操場。
同學(xué)	①相互學(xué)習(xí)，相互幫助。 ②積極參加課外活動(dòng)，提高能力。
老師	①對(duì)我們的一切要求嚴(yán)格。 ②......(自擬一點(diǎn)）
感想	......(自擬兩點(diǎn)）

要求： 

1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。

2. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮�！啊�…”部分需自擬。

3. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右。

My Mother School

I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School. I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years. It’s a very beautiful school which provides us with a good environment to study. There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there.

Besides that, we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life. We take an active part in after-school activities and it improves our abilities. The teachers are strict with us, but they are patient enough to explain everything to us. When something worries me, I often ask my teacher for help.

I’m proud I can study in this school, and I’ll remember my mother school forever.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇該材料作文，寫一寫自己對(duì)三年來母校的感想。本題所給材料較為詳細(xì)。寫作中注意從學(xué)校，老師和同學(xué)們?nèi)齻�(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，并表達(dá)自己的感想。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。