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從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費提供塑料袋，掀起全國“拒塑”的環(huán)保運動。假如你是李華，準備以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 為題，寫一篇保護環(huán)境的英語演講稿。 內(nèi)容包含：(1)。在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋；(2)。盡可能地再利用使用過的課本；(3)。離開教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈；(4)。最好走路或騎自行車上學；(5)。簡述理由：保護環(huán)境，減少污染，節(jié)約能源等。參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保護protect 能源energy污染pollution 課本textbook
　　What Can We Do for the Environment
Our environment is becoming
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Answer 1

What can we do for the Enyironment
Our environment is becoming worse and worse, what can we do for the environment? Think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use closh bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to orotect the environment.The second thing we can do is yo reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroomsin order to save energy.What’s more, It would be better if we walk oe ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.
In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment,I believe we can make the world a better place to live.

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇介紹該為環(huán)保做些什么的提綱作文，文章總體應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。本篇書面表達是給出提示要點的作文， 所給提示的內(nèi)容一定要寫全面，按照提示詞的思路進行寫作。在寫作過程中，應(yīng)適當使用連詞，使文章過渡自然。最后檢查作文時，還要注意單詞拼寫、標點符號、字母大小寫等細節(jié)問題。
【亮點說明】該文章使用了the first、the second這些詞，是的敘述非常條例。作者還使用了a little bit、instead of、in order to、what’s more、try one’s best，in fact等短語，都為文章增色不少。