Question

2．你身邊的每個(gè)人對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)都具有特殊的意義．請(qǐng)以"My special ______"為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述你家庭的某個(gè)成員或你的朋友、老師、同學(xué)等．
要求：1．在題目空格處填入你要描述的對(duì)象，如grandma，teacher 或friend等；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3.80詞左右．
My specialgrandma
My grandma is special to me because we're like friends．She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble．There are no secrets
between us．
When I am with my grandma，we spend a lot of happy time together．I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything．My grandma is good at many things．One thing she's best at is cooking．She often cooks delicious food for me．I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的家庭成員，朋友、老師或同學(xué)．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用．寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)喜愛(ài)所描述的人．

解答 My special grandma
    My grandma is special to me because we're like friends．She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble．There are no secrets between us．
    When I am with my grandma，we spend a lot of happy time together．I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything．My grandma is good at many things．One thing she's best at is cooking．She often cooks delicious food for me．I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱作文，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容較為開(kāi)放，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．