Question

11．安順市今年能否創(chuàng)建"全國(guó)文明城市"成功，不僅要靠市委市政府的全力推進(jìn)和各單位的扎實(shí)工作，更要靠每一位安順市民從自身做起，一言一語(yǔ)現(xiàn)內(nèi)涵，一舉一止顯文明．作為中學(xué)生的你，也有義務(wù)為我市爭(zhēng)創(chuàng)"全國(guó)文明城市"貢獻(xiàn)一份力量．請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求，完成A、B兩項(xiàng)寫(xiě)作任務(wù)．
A．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的想法，用完整的英語(yǔ)句子或簡(jiǎn)略的英語(yǔ)答語(yǔ)回答下面五個(gè)問(wèn)題．
1．Is Anshun a more beautiful city than before？
2．Do you think it is necessary for Anshun to be a civilized（文明的）city？
3．Are you happy with the strive？
4．What should you do to make Anshun become a green city？
5．How can you become a civilized middle school student？
B．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)上面五個(gè)問(wèn)題的內(nèi)容及你的同答，以"What should I do for the strive？（我該為創(chuàng)建做什么？）"為題，寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的英語(yǔ)短文．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名．
參考詞匯：
1．創(chuàng)建（n．）strive
2．申報(bào)bid for
3．稱號(hào)（n．）title
4．全國(guó)文明城市Nationally Civilized City
5．為…作貢獻(xiàn)contribute to
What Should I Do For the Strive？                                                                              

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
   As a middle school student，I am terribly happy for that，because I will do what I can to help the strive．作為一名中學(xué)生，我非常高興，因?yàn)槲視?huì)盡我所能去幫助創(chuàng)建．   這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)椤�，同時(shí)這個(gè)句子里又有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句what I can to help the strive．
高分句型二
it is everyone's duty to contribute to the strive and struggle for the honor of"Nationally Civilized City"，isn't it？爭(zhēng)取創(chuàng)建"全國(guó)文明城市"并且為之奮斗是每個(gè)人的責(zé)任，不是嗎？這是一個(gè)反意疑問(wèn)句，前半句是肯定句，后半句是否定句．

解答 What Should I Do For the Strive？As we know，Anshun city is becoming more and more beautiful．Actually，Anshun is bidding for the title of Nationally Civilized City，which is a must for our city to become green and famous in China．【要點(diǎn)一，點(diǎn)名主題，引出下文】
As a middle school student，I am terribly happy for that，because I will do what I can to help the strive【高分句型一，注意從句的使用】．What should we do then？Firstly，we can not litter everywhere and we should keep the street clean．Secondly，we should follow the traffic rules all times to keep safe．Thirdly，we should treat each other politely and behave in a civilized way．More importantly，we must plant more trees，flowers and plants to make the city greener．【要點(diǎn)二，詳細(xì)介紹如何創(chuàng)建文明城市】
To sum up，it is everyone's duty to contribute to the strive and struggle for the honor of"Nationally Civilized City"，isn't it？【要點(diǎn)三，結(jié)尾緊扣主題】【高分句型二，注意反意疑問(wèn)句的使用】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．