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【題目】 我們的身邊有很多榜樣人物，他們的行為時時影響著我們。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“My Role Model”為主題的征文活動。假定你是李華，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談談誰是你心中的偶像，他（她）是怎樣的人，用具體事例說明為什么他（她）是你的偶像，以及你從他（她）身上學到了什么。

提示問題：Who is your role model?

What’s he / she like?

Why is he / she your role model? Give one or two examples.

What have you learned from him / her?

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2.可以圍繞主題和提示問題，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：

My Role Model

Everyone has a role model. My role model is my friend Tom.

He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I didn’t do well in studying, so he not only helped me with every subject, but also told me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Tom’s help, I made great progress and I thanked him very much.

I think I am lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.

Written by Li Hua

【解析】

1.題干解讀：題干要求考生圍繞四個問題進行闡述；其中介紹原因時用舉例子展開敘述作為文章的主體，學到了什么可以作為文章的結(jié)尾，進行一個升華；舉例的時候最好用過去的時態(tài)，因為闡述的是一個發(fā)生過的事實；學到了什么可以用一般現(xiàn)在時；注意分段和句子的銜接。