Question

12．寫一篇介紹自己房間的作文，如房間里有電話、床、書桌、椅子、書柜和沙發(fā)．書和磁帶在書柜里，電子游戲在沙發(fā)上，狗在椅子的下面…
可以發(fā)揮自己的想象，題目自擬，不少于50．
I have a small but tidy room．There is a bed，a chair，a desk，a bookshelf and one sofa in it．I often put my books and tapes in the bookshelf and my video games on the sofa．The lovely creature sitting under my chair is my dog．This is my room．I love my room．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I have a small but tidy room我有一個(gè)小但是整潔的房間．
but表示轉(zhuǎn)折．
【高分句型二】
There is  a bed，a chair，a desk，a bookshelf and one sofa in it里面有一張床，一個(gè)書桌，一個(gè)書架和一個(gè)沙發(fā)．
there be句型，表示有．

解答 I have a small but tidy room．【高分句型一】（總述）There is  a bed，a chair，a desk，a bookshelf and one sofa in it．【高分句型二】I often put my books and tapes in the bookshelf and my video games on the sofa．The telephone is on the desk．The lovely creature sitting under my chair is my dog（房間布局）．This is my room．I love my room．

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