Question

5．根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約90詞的短文．要求完整敘述故事內(nèi)容．
提示詞：拐棍：stick

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫說說一個(gè)小男孩做的一件好事，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
描述圖畫；一起拍照，發(fā)現(xiàn)一位失明的老人過馬路，牽著木棍帶著老人過馬路，喊老人一起照相
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
take photos 照相
happen to 碰巧
ask sb to do sth 讓某人做某事
do a good did 做了一件好事
【高分句型】
1．One day，a little boy with his father and mother were taking photos in front of a building，①when he②happened to see an old blind man going across the street．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②happen to 碰巧
2．Without saying anything，the boy ran over to the grandpa and led him by the stick in his hand to get to the other side of the street．
without介詞，沒有…，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
3．The family all laughed gleefully ①because the boy②did a good deed．
①because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
②do a good did 做了一件好事

解答 One day，a little boy with his father and mother were taking photos in front of a building，when he happened to see an old blind man going across the street．（第一幅圖）【高分句型】Without saying anything，the boy ran over to the grandpa and led him by the stick in his hand to get to the other side of the street．（第二，三幅圖）
【高分句型】His parents showed the boy an understanding smile．The boy asked his father to take a group photo with the old man．The family all laughed gleefully because the boy did a good deed．（第四幅圖）【高分句型】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．要求介紹．同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．
這篇短文不使用了大量的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)．．如a little boy with his father andmother were takeing photos in front of a building，Without saying anything，the boy ran over to the grandpa等，when等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理．