Question

【題目】 書(shū)面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。

一直以來(lái)，同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。在你班的主題班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。

Yes	No
Help us understand what we have learned； Practice makes prefect；...	Take up too much time； Make us less interested in studying；...
Your opinion：

要求：

1．80詞以上。

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students，

I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.

Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．

In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.

That's all. Thanks.

【解析】寫(xiě)作審題之后能明白寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是要寫(xiě)出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn)，其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來(lái)佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：首先用一個(gè)自然段來(lái)闡明寫(xiě)作的主題，表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)（認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次，開(kāi)始具體陳述觀點(diǎn)，陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例，相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)，think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn)，Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)。最后可以用說(shuō)理的方式來(lái)介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn)，就是說(shuō)作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來(lái)說(shuō)出色地完成了既定的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。