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18．最近你和父母就你要參加�；@球隊交換了意見，各自闡述了觀點．現(xiàn)在請你參照表內(nèi)所提的信息，謝一篇100詞左右的短文．

Your parents'ideas	Your ideas
1．less time for study	1…
2．not strong enough	2…
3．get easily injured	3…

注意：（1）開頭部分已寫好，你只需接著寫．
（2）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中父母的 想法和 你的 想法（至少三條）．
（3）不得使用真實姓名和校名．
Recently I've had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the the school basketball team．They don't think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player．I might get hurt while playing．And they hope I will spend more time on my studies．They think the students who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy．
However，I don't agree with them．I know they care about me．But becoming a member of the school team is my dream，you know．I'll try my best to keep a balance between my study and sport．And I can be more careful when playing．The other members are friendly and helpful．I can make friends with them．Playing basketball can make me stronger and more energetic．It's more important for me to learn how to work with others in a team．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是你和父母就你要參加校籃球隊交換了意見，各自闡述了觀點，談?wù)勀愀改傅囊庖姾妥约旱囊庖姡畷r態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．父母的意見；更少的時間學(xué)習(xí)，不夠強壯，容易受傷
2．我的意見；
常用到的重點短語：
be going to  打算…
and so on 等等
of course 當(dāng)然
take photos照相
【高分句型】
1．They don't think①I am ②strong enough to be a good basketball player．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②adj+enough+to do sth 足夠…去做某事
2．They think①the students②who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy．
①think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，who作為從句的主語，修飾先行詞students．
3．①It's more important for me to learn②how to work with others in a team．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
②疑問詞+to do sth 作為learn的賓語．

解答 Should I join the school basketball team？
Recently I've had a discussion with my parents about whether or not I should join the school basketball team．
They don't think I am strong enough to be a good basketball player．【高分句型】I might get hurt while playing．And they hope I will spend more time on my studies．They think the students who like playing basketball are mostly bad students and playing sports will need more energy．【高分句型】（父母的意見；更少的時間學(xué)習(xí)，不夠強壯，容易受傷）However，I don't agree with them．I know they care about me．But becoming a member of the school team is my dream，you know．I'll try my best to keep a balance between my study and sport．And I can be more careful when playing．The other members are friendly and helpful．I can make friends with them．Playing basketball can make me stronger and more energetic．It's more important for me to learn how to work with others in a team．【高分句型】（我的意見）

點評 這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來．本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果