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8．春天是個(gè)萬(wàn)物復(fù)蘇，春暖花開(kāi)的季節(jié)，各個(gè)學(xué)校都組織學(xué)生出去春游，九年級(jí)的學(xué)生是否也應(yīng)該參與其中？有的學(xué)生認(rèn)為九年級(jí)學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)繁忙，不應(yīng)該參加春游；而有的學(xué)生認(rèn)為九年級(jí)學(xué)生更要注意勞逸結(jié)合，應(yīng)該參加春游．結(jié)合以下表格信息，選擇你的觀點(diǎn)并闡述理由．

Pros	Cons
◆relax oneself ◆learn to look after oneself ◆be more connected to the teachers ◆…	◆a waste of time ◆feel tired after it ◆may have safety problems ◆…

注意：（1）選擇其中一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整；
（2）理由必須包括表中你所選擇的觀點(diǎn)的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
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（4）詞數(shù)：80～100．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

We  take part in the school trip．（should/shouldn't）In the English class，we had a discussion on whether Grade Nine students should take part in the school trip．In my opinion．                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
1，F(xiàn)irstly，if we are given short breaks from schoolwork，we could relax ourselves，which is  good for our study．if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，是復(fù)合句；此句還用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，be given；此句還用了which 引導(dǎo)的非限制定語(yǔ)從句．
2，Secondly，it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves．此句用了結(jié)構(gòu)it is+形容詞+for sb  to do 對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)干…是…的．

解答 We   should    take part in the school trip．
In the English class，we had a discussion on whether Grade Nine students should take part in the school trip． Some people think we should not take part in it．   But in my opinion，I think we should take part in the school trip．Firstly，if we are given short breaks from schoolwork，we could relax ourselves，which is  good for our study．＜高分句型＞And a long-time study will only make us tired and stressed．Secondly，it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves．＜高分句型＞Thirdly，we could be more connected to both our teachers and our classmates．We may understand each other better through this trip．Finally，the last school trip for us could be our everlasting memory．
  In a word，we should go and have fun!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)圖表半命題作文時(shí)，我們最好不要漏掉其中的要點(diǎn)，行文注意簡(jiǎn)化，不要拖沓冗長(zhǎng)，適當(dāng)寫(xiě)幾個(gè)復(fù)合句比較用易得高分，但同時(shí)注意，適當(dāng)用幾個(gè)人連接詞，使文章顯得有層次感，同時(shí)，在作文完成的時(shí)候注意檢查，修改，如果有條件的話最好能夠先打個(gè)草稿，再抄到答題紙上，方能成為一篇好文章