Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分15分，中考時滿分為25分）

假設(shè)你是劉莉，要去英國一所學(xué)校游學(xué)兩個月，希望在當(dāng)?shù)卣乙粋�host family。請按要求寫一封約100詞的電子郵件給中介公司的經(jīng)理Mr. Green。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 自己的個人情況，如年齡、性別、愛好；來自華東，希望改善英語口語（Spoken English);

2. 提出自己對該家庭的要求（如下表所示）

Family members	English speaker；no smoker; with a secondary student
Housing	Near the school, within a 20-minute walk; a bedroom with a bathroom
Others	Cooking by myself…

注意：郵件需涵蓋以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。

Dear Mr. Green,

My name is Liu Li,

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Liu Li

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m a sixteen-year-old boy from East-China/eastern China. I’m going to study in a secondary school in England for two months.

I like making friends. I’m weak in spoken English and I hope to improve it. That’s why I want to find a host family with a secondary student. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope it’s a family without smokers. Moreover, it’s better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom. As for the meals, I’d like to cook by myself because I’m fond of cooking.

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【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如’m weak in spoken English and I hope to improve it. That’s why I want to find a host family with a secondary student. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope it’s a family without smokers.等等。