Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）

根據(jù)提示，以My e-friend為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹您的筆友。要點(diǎn)：

1.Millie, 13歲, 來(lái)自英國(guó)，喜歡畫(huà)畫(huà)，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，擅長(zhǎng)歷史，并經(jīng)常幫助同學(xué)；

2.喜歡在課后和朋友們打網(wǎng)球。3.周末經(jīng)常和父母一起野餐，有時(shí)候去參觀博物館。4.她的夢(mèng)想是。。。。。

（ 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。）

My e-friend

I have an e-friend. Her name is Millie.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My e-friend

I have an e-friend. Her name is Millie. She is 13 years old. She comes from the UK. She is a good student in her class. She is good at history and she often helps students with it. She likes painting and listening to music. She likes to play tennis with friends after class. She often goes on a picnic with her parents on weekends. Her dream is to be a singer when she grows up.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：She is…等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來(lái)介紹朋友的年齡、國(guó)籍以及特點(diǎn)和喜好等，最后介紹她的夢(mèng)想。此處用了come from，be good at，help sb with sth等這些詞組，也讓文章增色不少。