Question

【題目】書面表達 (計20分)

為進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一篇演講稿。

注意： 1． 內容必須包括所給的全部要點, 可適當發(fā)揮．

2． 表達清楚, 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫規(guī)范；

3． 100字左右, 文章開頭已給出, 不計入總詞匯．

參考詞匯： be careful, on line, danger, call ．．． for …, go bad (變壞)

How to keep safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind． But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions．

First,_______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

How to keep safe

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Finally, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.

In short, safety must come first!

【解析】

試題這是一篇給材料作文，本文只給出了主要寫作要點。寫作中要注意從四個方面進行敘述，并自己補充一到兩點。動筆前應根據(jù)材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。寫作中注意使用連接詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系

寫作亮點：這篇短文就如何保持安全展，文中主要從4個方面來介紹，文中使用一些好的句型如：we should be careful when we make friends；Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health給文章增色不少。