Question

20．中共十八屆五中全會提出一對夫婦可生育兩個孩子政策后，全社會展開了熱烈的討論，某校也就"是否想要個弟弟或妹妹"對部分學生進行了一次問卷調查，請你根據(jù)此結果寫一份調查報告，并適當闡述你的觀點，問卷調查結果如圖所示：

注意：1．全文字數(shù)90詞左右；
2．條理清楚，書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標點符號和大小寫使用正確；
3．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名，文章開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)．
Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister．The opinions are different．About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or asister．They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness togther．And they won't feel lonely anymore．What's more，they think they'll get more freedom．
But others disagree．They think they won't get used to the change．They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before．Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study．
In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．But we should respect our parents'choices．After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內容是某校就"是否想要個弟弟或妹妹"對部分學生進行的一次問卷調查，寫一份調查報告，并適當闡述你的觀點．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．調查結果；40%支持：不再孤獨，彼此幫助，分享喜憂．60%反對：擔心父母的愛，打擾學習…
2．你的觀點
常用到的重點短語：
get used to 習慣于
what's more 再者
after all 畢竟
as…as 一樣…
【高分句型】
1．Besides，they're afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．
①that引導的賓語從句．
②so…that如此…以致于…，that引導的結果狀語從句．
2．In my opinion，①it's hard to say ②whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．
①it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．
②say后面是whether 引導的賓語從句．
3．①After all，they're the persons ②who will make the final decision．
①after all 畢竟，做插入語．
②who作為關系詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞presons，who作為從句的主語．

解答 Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister．The opinions are different．
About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or a sister．They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness togther．And they won't feel lonely anymore．What's more，they think they'll get more freedom．（40%支持：不再孤獨，彼此幫助，分享喜憂）
But others disagree．They think they won't get used to the change．They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before．Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study．【高分句型】（60%反對：擔心父母的愛，打擾學習…）
In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．【高分句型】But we should respect our parents'choices．After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision．【高分句型】（我的觀點）

點評 考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．運用適當?shù)亩陶Z表達中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時也要符合事實．溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．