Question

根據(jù)以下有關(guān)Leo的個(gè)人情況介紹，以Leo Smith 為題，寫一篇介紹他的短文。

要求：用第三人稱;用詞在60~80 之間;所給信息必須全部用上。

Name: Leo Smith	Age: 15
Address: 69 Park Road	New YorkNationality: American
Occupation（職業(yè)）: student	Favourite subjects: art and P.E.
Weekday activities: swimming and working	Usual Saturday activity: having parties
Usual Sunday activity: watching TV

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

   Leo Smith is an American boy.He is fifteen years old.He lives at 69 Park Road New York with his parents.Leo is a student in No.4 High School.On weekdays, he studies very hard.Art and P.E.are his favourite subjects.In his spare time, he likes doing sports.He usually goes swimming three times a week.On Saturdays, he often has parties.He likes making friends and they always enjoy themselves.After a week’s hard work, he likes staying at home and watching TV on Sundays.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時(shí)針對(duì)個(gè)人的真實(shí)情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞�，更能加�?qiáng)作品的可讀性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)所提供的信息，介紹他人，介紹別人要用第三人稱，作者在寫作中，介紹了姓名、年齡、出處以及他一天所從事活動(dòng)，語(yǔ)句通順、符合邏輯。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。