Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

隨著“健康中國”活動(dòng)不斷地深入, 徐州市許多中小學(xué)也開展了“健康校園” 的建設(shè), 努力讓每一個(gè)孩子健康生活。假如Jim是你們學(xué)校健康俱樂部的一員, 也是你的好朋友, 請你根據(jù)提示介紹一下他的健康生活吧!

具體內(nèi)容如下:

What Jim eats	How he lives
早餐：一個(gè)雞蛋、一杯牛奶和一些包子 午餐：蔬菜、牛肉和米飯 晚餐：魚肉、面條和水果	起得早，常運(yùn)動(dòng) 一周游泳兩次幾乎不玩電腦游戲，原因…

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)60左右（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息, 否則不予評分。

I have a friend. He is Jim. He is a member of Health Club. He has a healthy life.

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I hope everyone can have a healthy life like Jim's.

Answer 1

【答案】I have a friend. He is Jim. He is a member of Health Club. He has a healthy life.

For breakfast, he always has an egg. He also eats some baozi and drinks a glass of milk. For lunch, he has rice, vegetables and beef. For dinner, he has fish, noodles and fruits.

He gets up early every day. He often exercises in the morning. He also goes swimming twice a week. He seldom plays computer games because it is bad for his eyes.

I hope everyone can have a healthy life like Jim’s.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料寫作，但寫作時(shí)要注意材料信息描述的完整性。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段重點(diǎn)敘述材料內(nèi)容，注意語句的連貫性。第三段簡單概括總結(jié)。