Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。(10分)

以My Family為題, 寫(xiě)一篇介紹你家人的短文。要求60詞左右。提示：1.我有一個(gè)大家庭。2.介紹父親和母親的情況，如：職業(yè)及工作地點(diǎn)等等。3.介紹我妹妹或弟弟的情況。4.我的祖父母和我們住在一起。5.我有一個(gè)快樂(lè)的家庭。

My Family

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Family

I have a big family. My father is 40 years old. He is a doctor. He works in a hospital. My mother is 38 years old. She is an English teacher. She works in a high school. She often helps me with my English. I have a sister. She is 10 years old. She is a student. I am a student, too. We are in the same school. My grandparents live with us. I have a happy family.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式夫人給材料作文主要介紹自己的家庭情況。包括：父母的情況，姐妹兄弟的情況，和誰(shuí)住在一起，及對(duì)家庭生活的快樂(lè)感受。所給的材料比較詳細(xì)，在寫(xiě)作中注意第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的一致。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文樸實(shí)簡(jiǎn)單，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤，注意到了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和主語(yǔ)是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)時(shí)的一致。