Question

7．假如你即將在學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動中發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿．要點(diǎn)提示如下：
（1）幾個月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞．
（2）從那時起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞．
（3）現(xiàn)在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友．
（4）有些鄰居有意見，認(rèn)為音樂很吵，無法入睡．
（5）你認(rèn)為人們可以跳廣場舞，但…
參考詞匯：跳廣場舞 do square dancing （對某人）有意見 have a complaint （against sb．）
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個．
（2）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Boys and girls，
I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about my grandma．
A few months ago，my grandma went to do square dancing after supper．Since then，she has been in love with square dancing．Now，she is much healthier than before．What's more，she has a lot of friends．However，some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing．They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night．
In my opinion，people can do square dancing becauseit is a good way to keep healthy．But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)題干可知：這是一篇提綱作文．主要以發(fā)言稿的形式來進(jìn)行寫作．寫作要點(diǎn)：介紹奶奶喜歡廣場舞的事情，給奶奶帶來的益處，以及鄰居的意見和我的觀點(diǎn)．
人稱：第三人稱為主；
時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主；
主要短語：
be in love with；愛上；
What's more；而且；
have a complaint；抱怨；
a good way to do…；做…的好方法；
keep healthy；保持健康；
make a lot of noise．制造很多噪音，太吵；
高分句型：
1．Now，she is much healthier than before．
現(xiàn)在，她比以前健康多了．
比較連詞than，可知這是一個含有比較級的句子．much+形容詞比較級+than+比較的對象．
2．They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night．
他們認(rèn)為音樂是如此大聲，他們不能在晚上入睡．
本句主要運(yùn)用了so…that…句型．表示：如此…以至于…引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句
3．they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise．
他們應(yīng)該考慮別人的感受，他們不應(yīng)該制造太多的噪音．
and 連接兩個并列分句，分別敘述了應(yīng)該怎樣做，不應(yīng)該怎樣做．

解答 Boys and girls，
   I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about my grandma．   
   A few months ago，my grandma went to do square dancing after supper．＜介紹奶奶何時開始跳廣場舞．＞Since then，she has been in love with square dancing．＜奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞．＞【高分句型1】Now，she is much healthier than before．What's more，she has a lot of friends．＜跳廣場舞，給奶奶帶來的好處．＞
   However，some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing．【高分句型2】They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night．＜鄰居們的意見＞
   In my opinion，people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy．【高分句型3】But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise．＜我的看法．＞
   That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 本題主要考查提綱作文．寫此類題目的作文，首先審題：要讀懂題干內(nèi)容和要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，注意文體，以及寫作的人稱和時態(tài)．然后根據(jù)提綱：抓住文章的中心，根據(jù)題干信息內(nèi)容，考慮所要選用的單詞，短語，句型．最后再修改，潤色全文．