Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你們班將于星期六騎摩拜單車去頤和園郊游，你打算邀請(qǐng)你們班的交換生Peter參加。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)的安排，以及他需要做什么準(zhǔn)備。

提示詞語(yǔ)：the Summer palace, by mobike, school gate, climb, shoes

提示問(wèn)題：● When and where are you going to meet?

● What are you going to do there?

● What do you advise Peter to prepare?

Dear peter,

How is it going?

I’m writing to invite you to the Summer Palace.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How’s it going?

I’m writing to invite you to the Summer Palace. We’ll go there by mobike on Saturday. And we’ll meet at 7:00 at the school gate. In the Summer Palace, we’ll climb the mountains and take pictures. We’ll have a long way to go, so you’d better wear your sports shoes. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給Peter寫信，邀請(qǐng)他一起騎摩托單車去頤和園郊游，并在信中告訴他集合的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)安排以及需要做什么準(zhǔn)備等。寫信時(shí)，應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容都包括其中，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。題目中是用問(wèn)題的形式給予了我們提示，我們應(yīng)具體將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意動(dòng)詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)，要注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)從句子結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。為提升文章檔次，在短文中應(yīng)注意使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和句型，并注意使用一些連接成分和過(guò)度成分。