Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李明，給你的筆友Jim寫一封信，告訴他你是怎么保持身體健康不生病。70詞左右。提示詞：keep the air fresh, do exercise, food and drink, spit, throw litter around, habit, have a good rest.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your letter. Now let me tell youhow to keep healthy in my daily life.

I often do sports to keep healthy. My favoutite sport is running. I run every day in the park. It can help to build me up and now I feel well and look fit.

Food can give us energy. I like eating more fruit and vegetables and less meat. And I also drink enough water every day. So I am very healthy, because I have healthy eating habits.

Best wishes.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求按照要求給筆友寫一封信，說明自己是如何保持健康的。寫作中要按照題干的要求重點(diǎn)從運(yùn)動和飲食方面進(jìn)行陳述，表達(dá)出自己良好的生活習(xí)慣等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了自己的生活方式，敘述了自己是怎樣保持健康的。文中所要求的運(yùn)動和飲食方面都得到了說明，符合文章的要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含副詞、連詞以及形容詞比較級的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如build me up，feel well and look fit.，And，also，So，more fruit and vegetables and less meat.，學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。