Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

生活中有很多東西能夠影響我們的情緒，比如天氣，顏色，環(huán)境等等。如果我們遇到心情不好的時候，應(yīng)該怎么辦？寫一篇70詞左右的短文。

提示詞（不分先后）：rainy, color, noisy, in bad mood, angry, sad…

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to control our feelings

Do you get angry when your friends sing loudly when you are trying to work? When it rains for a few days, are you often in a bad mood? If you do, you need to control your feelings and stop getting angry so easily.

Controlling feelings is important to us all. If we control our feelings well, we can find what caused the problem and then we can find better ways to solve the problem. Also controlling feelings can help to make friends with more people.

How can we control our feelings?. Every time you get angry, write down why you are angry. Read it later and you will control yourself. Ask your friends to stop talking to you when you get angry. This will teach you not to be angry. When you get angry, walk away from the problem and go somewhere to do something different.

If everyone can control our bad feelings, our lives will be better and happier.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以“遇到心情不好的時間，應(yīng)該怎么辦”為話題寫一篇短文。短文應(yīng)該包括：描述現(xiàn)象、談?wù)撐：�、解決措施等方面。簡單描述周圍環(huán)境對人的情緒的影響，說明壞的影響對生活、學(xué)習(xí)的危害，并提出一些好的建議。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，可以借助一些情態(tài)動詞幫助表達(dá)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文第一段描述環(huán)境對情緒的影響，指出人們需要控制自己的壞情緒；第二段描述控制情緒的重要性；第三段講述怎樣控制我們的情緒；最后是結(jié)尾句。短文條理分明，層次清楚；語言通順，語義連貫。短文用到了大量的帶有時間狀語從句的復(fù)合句、條件狀語從句的復(fù)合句、賓語從句的復(fù)合句，用到了大量的短語和恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫徒Y(jié)構(gòu)。這些都增強(qiáng)了文章的表達(dá)力和感染力，使短文生動具體，為本文增色不少。