Question

12．假如你是李華，暑假將有來自英國的三十位同學來你校交流學習，你給英方負責人Mr．Cave寫封電子郵件，申請派一位同學住到你家里．開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
郵件內(nèi)容要求包括以下三個方面：
（1）簡要描述一下你的家；
（2）你希望你想接待的同學是一個什么性格的人；
（3）你打算向這位同學介紹中國的什么．
注意：（1）70詞左右；
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透漏考生真實身份的任何信息．
Dear Mr．Cave，
I am very happy to have a student in my home．
There are three people in my family，and my parents are very friendly．Also，it is just takes 15 minutes'walk from my home to school．I am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football，so I hope he is the same as me．Therefore，we can share a lot of interesting things and play sports together．My spoken English is quite good，if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friends．I am sure he will enjoy himself at my home．I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們按要求寫一封電子郵件，郵件開頭結(jié)尾已給出，現(xiàn)在需要補充正文內(nèi)容，內(nèi)容需從這三方面去寫：簡要描述一下你的家；你希望你想接待的同學是一個什么性格的人；你打算向這位同學介紹中國的什么這三方面去寫，可作適當拓展；其次寫作時要用一般現(xiàn)在時及第一人稱．
重點短語和句型：
introduce sb．to sb．向某人介紹某人enjoy oneself 玩得開心、愉快look forward to 期望、盼望
It is just take 15 minutes'walk from my home to school．（It takes sb．…to do sth．）從我家步行到學校只要15分鐘．
I am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football．（定語從句）我是一個性格外向、喜歡運動的男孩，特別喜歡打籃球和踢足球．
if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friends．（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）如果他來我家，我會教他中文，告訴他關(guān)于一些關(guān)于中國的文化，并把他介紹給我的朋友們．

解答 There are three people in my family，and my parents are very friendly．Also，it is just takes 15 minutes'walk from my home to school．I am an outgoing boy who loves sports，especially basketball and football，so I hope he is the same as me．Therefore，we can share a lot of interesting things and play sports together．My spoken English is quite good，if he comes to my home，I will teach him Chinese，tell him some Chinese culture and introduce him to my friends．I am sure he will enjoy himself at my home．I am looking forward to your reply．

點評 對于提綱作文，寫作時應(yīng)先仔細審題，確定好時態(tài)、人稱，按照提綱內(nèi)容去寫，可作適當發(fā)揮．其次注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，語法正確，表達時可多用一些高分型短語和句型，使文章表達更連貫、流暢．寫完作文后，應(yīng)認真檢查修改，注意單詞書寫等細節(jié)問題．