【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你的網(wǎng)友想要了解你們社區(qū)的情況，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回一分電子郵件，字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。

要點(diǎn)：

1.我們社區(qū)很現(xiàn)代。有各種俱樂部幫助我們。生病了可以去社區(qū)醫(yī)院。

2.老人孩子最喜歡花園,可以在那鍛煉還可以跳舞。

3.社區(qū)所有人友善而樂于助人。他們分享自己的一技之長，

空余時(shí)間幫助人們解決各種問題。

4.我們很幸運(yùn)有這樣的社區(qū)。我們就像一個(gè)大家庭。

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【答案】

Our community is very modern. There are all kinds of clubs to help us. People can go to the Community Hospital if they are ill/sick. Old people and children like the garden best. They can exercise and dance there. All the people in the community are kind and helpful. They share their different skills. They help people with all kinds of problems in their free time. We are lucky to have a community like this. We are like a big family.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹自己生活的社區(qū)，題目中已給出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，如社區(qū)的設(shè)施、人們可以做點(diǎn)什么、社區(qū)的人如何等，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。要注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，使用正確的詞匯、句型和語法。通過分析可知，這篇作文我們應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，要注意謂語動(dòng)詞和主語形式上的一致，正確使用be動(dòng)詞和其他動(dòng)詞。寫作時(shí)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，將相關(guān)內(nèi)容用正確的連詞連接，使文意連貫。還可以使用一些好的詞語和句型，使文章的表達(dá)流暢，提高表現(xiàn)力。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了自己的社區(qū)。首先，這篇短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間銜接緊密，意思連貫；其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法、詞匯都很準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，使用了很多短語和句式，而且句式豐富，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。作文中比較好的句型有There are all kinds of clubs to help us、All the people in the community are kind and helpful. 、They share their different skills. 、They help people with all kinds of problems in their free time、We are lucky to have a community like this等。

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