Question

【題目】書面表達：

以“Sandy’s lifestyle”為題，寫篇短文。

要點：1. Sandy每天吃各種各樣健康的食物來保持健康。

2. 她經(jīng)常吃雞蛋、面包和牛奶作為早餐。這頓早餐幫助她很好的開始一天的生活。課間吃些水果, 如…

3. 她午餐和晚餐吃… 她每天還需要喝八杯水。

4．但是她很少鍛煉。她想改變她的生活方式。

5．現(xiàn)在她計劃每天散步半小時. 在空余時間，她希望…

注意：1. 文章須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第二三要點發(fā)揮發(fā)揮2到3種水果、食物。

3. 字數(shù)70個左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Sandy’s lifestyle

Sandy is 12 years old. She eats all kinds of healthy food to keep healthy. For her breakfast, she often has eggs, bread and milk. This helps her start a good day. She often eats some fruit during the break. Such as apples, bananas, oranges and so on. She often eats hamburgers, chicken, fish and rice for lunch and supper. Every day she wants to drink eight glasses of water. But she seldom exercises, she wants to change her lifestyle. She plans to walk for 30 minutes every day and go swimming twice a week in her free time.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Sandy的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：She is ...，She often eats...；及She wants to...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了Sandy健康的生活方式，接下來介紹三餐分別吃什么食品，來保持健康飲食，但話頭一轉(zhuǎn)，強調(diào)她缺乏鍛煉，計劃加強體育鍛煉。牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達有邏輯性，更富有條理。