Question

2．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic"A difficult choice I had to make．"（以"一個艱難的選擇"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Using the following points as a reference．（以下問題供參考）
1．Have you ever had a difficult choice to make？
2．What made it so difficult for you？
3．What was your final decision？
4．Do you think it is a right decision？
Our lives are the sum of all ourchoices．The decisions wemake today，may very wellplay a critical role in our future tomorrow．When I wasthirteen，my mother alwayswanted me a girl who was good at school work．However，I was keen onplaying the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，which was notallowed by her．As a result，we quarreledwith each other a lot．As time passed by，I graduallyfound that one should be knowledgeable，no matter what he would bein the future．I decided towork hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby．Knowledge ispower，and I think thechoice I've made must be wise one．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl②who was good at school work．當(dāng)我十三歲的時候，我的媽媽總是想要我成為一個在學(xué)校工作的女孩．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句
②who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾先行詞girl，在從句中作邏輯主語．
高分句型二：
However，I ①was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，②which③was not allowed by her．然而，我非常熱衷于玩鼓，不喜歡學(xué)習(xí)，這是她不允許的．
①be keen on doing sth熱衷于做某事
②which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，修飾前面整個句子．
③一般過去時的被動語態(tài)，was/were+過去分詞

解答 Our lives are the sum of all our choices．The decisions we make today，may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow．【指出選擇的重要性】When I was thirteen，my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work．【高分句型一】However，I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn't like study at all，which was not allowed by her．【高分句型二】As a result，we quarreled with each other a lot．As time passed by，I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable，no matter what he would be in the future．I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby．【做出正確選擇的過程】Knowledge is power，and I think the choice I've made must be wise one．【總結(jié)全文】

點評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，考生在平時應(yīng)多注意常考的作文形式，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯