Question

10．為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂地成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議．假如你是王宏，用英語給校長(zhǎng)寫一篇不少于60詞的建議信．

注意：文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．這些天我們?cè)谡務(wù)撊绾芜^上更好的學(xué)校生活．句子中talk about表示談?wù)摰囊馑�，how+to引導(dǎo)的不定式在這里作賓語．
②What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．更重要的是，我希望他們能給我們少布置點(diǎn)作業(yè)，按時(shí)下課．句子中What's more表示更重要的是；hope后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語從句，on time表示按時(shí)．

解答 Dear Headmaster，
These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．（高分句型）Here are some of my suggestions．（引出話題） First，I hope our school will open the library more often．Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（對(duì)學(xué)校提出的建議）
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less and more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practise．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．（高分句型）（對(duì)老師們提出的建議）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．（我的希望）
Yours sincerely，
Wang Hong

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封建議信．給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)．寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤．注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫，為了使說明更具邏輯性，適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞．