Question

【題目】據(jù)報道，重慶將探索逐漸取消中考。為此，某外國語學(xué)校擬在校內(nèi)新開設(shè)一部分選修課程以提升學(xué)生的綜合素質(zhì)�，F(xiàn)校學(xué)生會面向廣大學(xué)生征集意見。假設(shè)你叫王華，請你以“If I can add one more course”為話題，寫一篇建議稿, 談?wù)勛约核�希望增設(shè)的課程。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 你希望增設(shè)哪門課程？ 2. 為什么選擇這門課程？ 3. 你希望從中學(xué)到什么？

（你可以從下列課程中任選一門，或者自選一門完成寫作：

烹飪：cooking 手工：handcrafting 表演：acting

園藝：gardening 音樂欣賞：music appreciation ……）

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Dear Student Union,

I’m very glad that our school will offer some new courses. If I can add one more course, I would like to choose

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Thank you!

Yours,

Wang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Student Union,

I’m very glad that our school will offer some new courses. If I can add one more course, I would like to choose cooking.

That is because I can’t cook at all. When I come back home from school, I just sit at the table and wait for dinner. My parents always cook for me. I never think about whether they are tired or not.

If I can learn some cooking skills at school, I can also make delicious food for my parents especially when they are tired from work. So I want to learn how to make dumplings, zongzi, salad and many other different kinds of food. I hope our school can add cooking.

Thank you!

Yours,

Wang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。