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7．初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)和生活即將結(jié)束，你的老師陪伴你度過了三年的校園生活．回顧其中的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記．請(qǐng)你用英文給你的某一位教師寫封信，和他（她）說說感激的心里話．要點(diǎn)提示：

教師表現(xiàn)	1．工作努力，認(rèn)真；   2．教學(xué)耐心（patient  adj．），待人友好．
留存記憶	1．嚴(yán)格要求也關(guān)愛學(xué)生； 2．師生相處和睦； 3．給予學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助； 4．學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)取得了進(jìn)步．

要求：1．內(nèi)容包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，意思完整，語言規(guī)范．
      2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，使語句連貫通暢．
      3．文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校．
      4.80詞左右，信的首尾已寫好．不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear my teacher，
      Leaving you and lovely junior school life，I have so many words from my heart to say．Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave． Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給你的某一位教師寫封信，和他（她）說說感激的心里話．注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1教師表現(xiàn)：1）．工作努力，認(rèn)真；2）．教學(xué)耐心，待人友好
2留存記憶：1）．嚴(yán)格要求也關(guān)愛學(xué)生；2）．師生相處和睦；3）．給予學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助；4）．學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)取得了進(jìn)步．

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
work hard努力學(xué)習(xí)
be strict with sb in sth對(duì)某人某事嚴(yán)格
take care of照顧
get on with sb 與某人相處
encourage sb to do sth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
because of …因?yàn)椤?br />make progress取得進(jìn)步

【高分句型】
1．I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are．
and連接的兩個(gè)感嘆句how+形容詞或副詞+主語+謂語！作為forget的賓語從句．
2．①When I had trouble in life，you②told me to be brave．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②tell sb to do sth 告訴某人做某事
3．①Because of your help，many students，including me，are ②more and more ③interested in English and④make much progress，too．
①because of因?yàn)椤�，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
②比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來越…
③be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣
④make progress取得進(jìn)步

解答 Dear my teacher，
     Leaving you-lovely junior schoollife，I have so many words from my heart to say．
     Since you became my English teacher three years ago，you've always been working hard．（工作努力，認(rèn)真）I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are【高分句型】（教學(xué)耐心，待人友好）．You're strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly（嚴(yán)格要求也關(guān)愛學(xué)生）．All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years．（師生相處和睦）I still remember when I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．【高分句型】（給予學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助）
     Because of your help，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．【高分句型】（學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)取得了進(jìn)步）You have given me so much．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了，寫作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．本題要注意信件的格式．