Question

【題目】書面表達。Dear all,

假如你是你校學生會主席李浩，號召同學們?yōu)橥趿巅x躍捐款。

王玲是第二中學的學生，八年級一班的班長，今年14歲，平時學習刻苦，成績優(yōu)秀。她的爸爸是位工人，媽媽是位農民。她家境貧寒。現(xiàn)在她患重病住院，需要手術。希望大家踴躍捐款，這樣她就可以接受手術（手術費約十萬元），很快恢復健康。

要求： 1、不能逐條翻譯所給信息，可以適當增減內容；

2、短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實地名、人名和校名；

3、詞數(shù)100字左右。文章開頭與結尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總字數(shù)。

Give a helping hand

Dear all,

A student from NO.2 Middle School needs our help!

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_____________________________________________________________________________Thanks a lot for your help!

Li Hao

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Give a helping hand

A student from NO.2 Middle School needs our help! Her name is Wang Ling, monitor of Class 1, Grade 8.She is fourteen years old. She often works hard and she is good at all subjects. Her father is a worker and her mother is a farmer. She has a poor family. Now she suffers from bad illnesses and is in hospital. She needs to be operated on. Because the expense of the operation is about 100000 yuan. I hope everyone will donate money to her actively, so that she can get the operation in time and she will recover soon .

Thanks a lot for your help!

Li Hao

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹號召同學們?yōu)橥趿巅x躍捐錢。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Her name is…， Her father is …，She has...，Because the expense of the operation is ...，I hope ...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系.

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了需要捐錢的學生名字，接下來介紹王玲的學習和遭受的困難，最后希望大家積極捐錢，并謝謝大家的幫助。此處work hard, be good at, suffer from, be in hospital, need to do sth, operate on, donate ...to...等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。