Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是韓梅，遠在美國的筆友Linda 給你寫信了！信中，Linda 向你了解中國有什么著名小吃(famous snack)。請根據(jù)表格提示給Linda回信。

Name	糖葫蘆(Tanghulu)
Place	中國各個地方，如天津、北京等
Materials used	糖（sugar）和山楂(haw)，草莓（strawberry）,葡萄，蘋果等
Taste	酸酸甜甜
How to make	手工制作，四個步驟，大約半小時可制成
History	始于宋代（the Song Dynasty）
Symbol	幸福和團圓（reunion）

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)：80左右（ 開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 短文應包含表格中的內容，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使短文連貫、自然；

3. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；

Dear Linda,

You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country. Well,

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Are you looking forward to eating it? Come to my country, and I’ll treat you to tanghulu.

Yours,

Han Mei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Linda,

You asked me what famous snacks there were in my country. Well,in my country ,one of the most famous snacks is tanghulu .It’s usually made of haws, which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar. But there are more materials for tanghulu today in some places,such as strawberries, grapes and even little apples. Tanghulu can be made through four steps and it needs for about half an hour.

It’s said that tanghulu ever saved the life of an emperor’s wife in the song Dynasty. It was so delicious and healthy that many Chinese people like eating it .It’s now seen as the bright symbols of happiness and reunion .

Are you looking forward to eating it ?Come to my country ,and I’ll treat you to tanghulu

Yours

Han Mei

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求按照提綱提示，給筆友介紹一下中國著名小吃“糖葫蘆”，要求從產地、材料、制作過程、歷史淵源及象征意義等方面進行寫作。短文要準確地使用主動被動語態(tài)，可以用be made of, be made in等等結構幫助表達。短文用一般過去時描述其歷史，用一般現(xiàn)在時描述現(xiàn)在的情況及其象征意義。短文是一封回信，要注意語言的選擇及應用文的格式。

寫作亮點：短文第一段介紹糖葫蘆的材料，制作過程等等，其中one of, be made of ,put on, cover with等等結構，使本段顯得簡捷、具體、生動；第二段介紹其歷史淵源及象征，其中的so…that…結構及be seen as使本段增色不少。最后一段簡短地結束短文，其中的look forward to, treat sb. to使短文更加生動。