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母愛(ài)情深，母愛(ài)無(wú)價(jià)；學(xué)會(huì)感恩，學(xué)會(huì)回報(bào)。某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。

提示：1．短文應(yīng)包括導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；

2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名。

3．詞數(shù)不少于80，開(kāi)頭已給出：不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

My mother

　　We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．________________

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One Possible Version My mother 　　We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food． 　　She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me． 　　When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most, I think． 　　評(píng)分意見(jiàn)： 　　(一)總體原則 　　考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言知識(shí)的能力，注重語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的意義和流暢性。 　　(二)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 　　1．Introduction 　　①age�、趈ob�、踠ook�、躠bility�、輍obby 　　2．What she did for you 　　3．What you will do for her 　　(三) 評(píng)分檔次 　　1．第一檔(13－15分) 　　信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤或基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 　　2．第二檔(10－12分) 　　信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。 　　3．第三檔(7－9分) 　　能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，但句子基本可讀。 　　4．第四檔(4－6分) 　　只能傳遞少量信息，表達(dá)不通順，只有少量句子可讀。 　　5．第五檔(1－3分) 　　只能傳遞個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。 　　(四)建議 　　3個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，每個(gè)要點(diǎn)各5分。第一個(gè)內(nèi)容的要點(diǎn)的5點(diǎn)信息不必按所給次序表達(dá)，每點(diǎn)信息各1分。