Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Millie, 今年13歲，請根據(jù)以下提示向同學(xué)們介紹你的生活方式

Lifestyle	Exercise	dance, swim, play football/ basketball/volleyball…
	Breakfast	egg, bread, milk
	Lunch	meat, fish, vegetables…
	Dinner	have soup, fruit, vegetables…
	drink lots of water, have enough sleep, keep happy every day

要求：句意連貫，語法正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，書寫認(rèn)真．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)80詞左右．

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Millie. I am 13. I have a healthy lifestyle. I like to do exercise. And I dance and swim twice a week. I usually play football, basketball and volleyball after school. For breakfast, I have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I have little meat, fish and much vegetables. For dinner, I have soup and eat some fruit, such as apples, bananas, oranges. And I have some vegetables. In the day, I like to drink lots of water. In the evening, I have enough sleep. So this helps me keep healthy everyday.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，以Millie的名字介紹自己的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is…，I like to...，I have...，So this helps me...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意利用提綱中所列詞匯，組成完整通順的句子。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹我有一個健康的生活方式，接下來介紹我的鍛煉，飲食，最后指出這些東西有利于保持健康。此處like to do sth, twice a week, play football, after school, for lunch, such as, help sb do sth, keep healthy等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。