Question

魯迅是一位偉大的作家。請(qǐng)你用所給提示詞及對(duì)魯迅的認(rèn)識(shí)，以“My favorite writer”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的英文短文。

提示：tall, short hair, wise, known, a fighter with his pen, young people, influence, thought

My favorite writer

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

                               My favorite writer

There are many famous writers in the world. And my favorite is Lu Xun. He was a tall man with short hair. He wrote many articles and books in his life. And he was known as a fighter with his pen. Now many young people are still influenced by his thoughts. As a student, I will work hard and become a great writer like him.

【解析】

試題分析：此文是一篇記敘文，主要介紹魯迅先生是我最喜愛的作家，根據(jù)所給單詞的提示可知主要讓介紹他的外貌，他的重要貢獻(xiàn)和對(duì)后人的影響。所給的提示詞在文章中都要出現(xiàn)，并不能出現(xiàn)較大的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，前后語(yǔ)句要連貫，句意完整通順。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒有或基本沒有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。