Question

【題目】

假如下面是你們班教室里的照片墻，墻上記錄了中考前學(xué)習(xí)和生活的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，以及考前老師的溫馨提示。忘不了備戰(zhàn)中考時(shí)充實(shí)而快樂(lè)的時(shí)光，請(qǐng)你以“Preparation for High School Entrance Exam”（備戰(zhàn)中考）為題，寫(xiě)一篇80-100詞的短文。

1. 請(qǐng)闡述圖中信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；

3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)正確。

學(xué)習(xí)區(qū)	Listen to the teacher	生活區(qū)	Eat healthy food	提示區(qū)	Avoid making mistakes
	Take notes		Exercise		Learn to relax
	Finish doing…		Have enough sleep		Be on time
	…		…		…

Preparation for High School Entrance Exam

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Answer 1

【答案】Preparation for High School Entrance Exam

High School Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when our teachers and students worked together to prepare for it. In order to get a good grade, we all listened to the teachers carefully in class and took notes at the same time. After class, we finished our homework on time. If we had some difficult problems, our teachers would explain to us in details. All the teachers encouraged us not to give up and keep on studying. Besides, to study well, health comes first. Our teachers told us to eat healthy food, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and so on. We also did exercise every day and had enough sleep. The teachers told us not to feel stressful and learn to relax. We must be careful in the exam and avoid making mistakes. What’s more, we must be on time. We all felt tired and nervous, but what a full and happy time!

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以Preparation for High School Entrance Exam為題，介紹備戰(zhàn)中考的時(shí)光。題目中用照片墻的形式呈現(xiàn)了備戰(zhàn)的具體內(nèi)容，并給出了一些關(guān)鍵詞，學(xué)生們應(yīng)依據(jù)這些圖片和關(guān)鍵詞，展開(kāi)合理的想象，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。審題可知，這篇短文的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括三個(gè)方面：分學(xué)習(xí)、生活和提示三個(gè)方面解析介紹，注意分清層次和結(jié)構(gòu)，合理安排各個(gè)方面的信息，注意上下文的銜接、過(guò)渡應(yīng)自然。短文應(yīng)以第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫(xiě)完整的句子。可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，清晰、準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)自己的意思。而為了提升作文檔次，應(yīng)在文中穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。