Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)你以David的身份給May寫一封信, 介紹你自己和你家人的情況。你可以談?wù)勊麄兊膼酆煤退麄兯�喜歡的食物。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞: family, play soccer, fish, chicken, vegetables

要求: 50詞左右。

Dear May,

I'm David. I'm from England. I want to tell you about my family.

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Yours,

David

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear May,

I'm David. I'm from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They're my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father likes playing soccer. He likes eating fish very much. My mother likes watching TV. Chicken is her favorite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We like playing computer games and ping-pong. We don't like eating vegetables. We like eating hamburgers.

Yours,

David

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，以David的身份給May寫一封信, 介紹你自己和你家人的情況。你可以談?wù)勊麄兊膼酆煤退麄兯�喜歡的食物。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’m...，I want to...，My father likes...，My sister Julia and I are...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意寫作中使用題目中所提示的詞。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的名字、國籍、寫信目的是介紹關(guān)于家人的情況，接下來家里成員以及他們的愛好，最后介紹我們喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)、喜歡的食物。此處be from, want to do sth, tell sb about sth, like doing sth, play the computer games等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。