Question

11．每個人都有自己心目中的英雄．誰是你心中的英雄？他/她有哪些令你欽佩的事跡？你從他/她身上學(xué)到了什么？《二十一世紀(jì)學(xué)生英文報》正在舉辦以"The Hero in My Heart"為題的征文比賽活動．請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇不少于50詞的征文參加此次比賽．所給提示詞語供選用．
提示詞語：kind，patient，help，encourage，think


The Hero in My HeartEveryone has the hero in his heart．                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①When I was a child，I always thought to be weak because I'm thin and weak in sports and maths．當(dāng)我還是個孩子的時候，我總是覺得身體虛弱，因為我在運動和數(shù)學(xué)方面都很弱．這里when引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句，because引導(dǎo)一個原因狀語從句．
②Besides，he also helped me with maths．此外，他還幫助我學(xué)數(shù)學(xué)．句子中help sb with sth表示幫助某人做某事．

解答 The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has his hero in his heart．My hero is my grandpa．（引出話題）My grandpa is a simple maths teacher．He is very kind and patient．（我的爺爺所具備的素質(zhì)）
When I was a child，I always thought to be weak because I'm thin and weak in sports and maths．（高分句型）Not only my teachers and classmates，but also my mother always scolds that how stupid I was．But grandpa didn't think so．He always said to me，"Don't give up，just try again"．Besides，he also helped me with maths（高分句型）．Because of his patient and good teaching，I found maths was so interesting and became good at it day by day．Because of his encouragement，I overcome lots of difficulties and find back my confidence．（爺爺為我所做的令我難忘的事）
In a word，he is the greatest man in my heart．He tells me how to grow as a person through his action and words．I love my grandpa very much．（我從爺爺身上所學(xué)到的東西）

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