Question

寒假將至，同學(xué)們就自己寒假生活的安排進(jìn)行了交流。請(qǐng)你用英語向大家介紹一下班上的同學(xué)及你自己的假期計(jì)劃。文章開頭已給出。

要求：1、語句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，詞數(shù)為60-80個(gè)單詞；

2、文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名或?qū)W生 姓名；

3、用上方框里面的提示和短語，內(nèi)容也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Winter vacation is coming. We have different plans for it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Answer 1

Winter vacation is coming. We have different plans for it. We discussed about our plans with one another. Now, allow me to tell you something about our plans. Some of the classmates are going to take a trip to Xi’an, they want to relax themselves during the trip. Some students are hard-working, they are going to study at home and read a lot of books to increase their knowledge. They are going to prepare for their future study. Some students want to keep fit ,so they are going to take part in more exercise， like going skating with friends，they also want to go to the movies for fun。Some other students want to learn something important，for example，they want to learn to make fruit salad，they want to take piano lessons，too。I also made my plan,I am going to visit my uncle and aunt, I haven't seen them for a long time. And I also want to study English well in the coming year, so I am going to read more English books and read English aloud every morning during the winter vacation, I want to be a famous English teacher in the future ，so I must prepare for it. I believe that my dream will come true in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求學(xué)生用英語向大家介紹一下班上的同學(xué)及你自己的假期計(jì)劃。文章開頭已給出。在寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1、語句通順，意思連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，詞數(shù)為60-80個(gè)單詞；2、文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名或?qū)W生 姓名；3、用上方框里面的提示和短語，內(nèi)容也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。題目中給出的詞匯非常具體詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前要根據(jù)這些內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱。確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)。關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作中要注意語意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章使用了通俗的語言表達(dá)了題目要求的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)。條理清晰明了。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。