Question

【題目】書面表達

建設(shè)平安校園是我們每個人的責(zé)任與義務(wù)。作為一名學(xué)生，我們更應(yīng)該珍惜自己的生命，更應(yīng)該注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并擔(dān)任校學(xué)生會主席，請你就安全問題，向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封安全倡議書。

內(nèi)容提示：(1)不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校;

(2)不私自下河洗澡;

(3)不打架;

(4)上學(xué)放學(xué)的途中應(yīng)該注意安全;

(5)遇緊急情況，立即報告警察或老師。

參考詞匯：管制刀具：restricted knives or things; 洗澡：have a bath; 打架：fight;

緊急情況：emergency; 交通安全：pay attention to the traffic

寫作要求：(1)用詞恰當(dāng)，要點全面，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。

(2)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

(3)嚴禁出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息。

Dear students,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear students,

As we know,safety is one of the most important things in our lives. So,we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ or teachers' permission. And,we should be friendly to others,so fighting is strongly banned. We should always pay attention to the traffic safety on our way to school or home. Furthermore,if we meet some emergency,we must call for help from the police or our teachers. In a word,following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是就安全問題，向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第一人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。其次考生可從內(nèi)容提示展開作文。寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文意連貫，表達流暢。常用到的重點短語：restricted knives or things管制刀具；have a bath洗澡；try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事；be friendly to sb 對某人友好；pay attention to 留意，關(guān)注；on one's way to sp．在某人去某地的路上；furthermore此外；in a word總之；make sb do sth讓某人做某事；in peace和平地。

高分句型：

1．①Furthermore，②if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．

①furthermore此外，引出下文。②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞must，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時。

2．①In a word，②following these safety rules above can ③make us live in peace．

①in a word總之，總述以上內(nèi)容。②following these safety rules above 動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞要用單數(shù)。③make sb do sth讓某人做某事，make的用法。