Question

【題目】.書面表達(dá):

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的信息對(duì)你最好的朋友Tommy進(jìn)行介紹。

姓名	Tommy	學(xué)校班級(jí)	陽(yáng)光中學(xué)七年級(jí)二班
外貌特征	高高壯壯，短頭發(fā), 他戴一副眼鏡。
興趣愛好	足球踢得很好，周三下午和好朋友們踢足球。
學(xué)校情況	他住得離學(xué)校近，每天步行上學(xué)。老師們對(duì)他很好，下課后他經(jīng)常和同學(xué)談?wù)撟闱虮荣�，在學(xué)校很開心。

要求：1、根據(jù)表中的所給英語要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯。

2、意思連貫，語言通順，語法正確，主題明確。

3、字?jǐn)?shù)：60詞左右。(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

陽(yáng)光中學(xué) Sunshine Middle School.

This is my friend Tommy

Tommy is my best friend.

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Answer 1

【答案】

This is my friend Tommy

Tommy is my best friend. He is from Class Two, Grade Seven, Sunshine Middle School He is tall and strong. and he has short hair.He often wears glasses.

He plays football very well. He often plays on Wednesday morning with his friends. They play very happily every time.

He walks to school every day because his home is near the school. At school, he gets on well with everyone. The teachers are good to him and after class he often talks to classmates about football matches. He feels very happy at school.

He is also helpful. he often helps us with our homework. we all like him

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細(xì)，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容全面，語句通順，能完成習(xí)作的預(yù)期目的。在習(xí)作中用到了多個(gè)復(fù)合句，如：He walks to school every day because his home is near the school.能根據(jù)內(nèi)容做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮：At school, he gets on well with everyone.這使短文更有邏輯性。