Question

20．公共秩序，你我有責(zé)．假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的張濤，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，描述不文明行為，并倡議同學(xué)們?cè)谛��?nèi)外進(jìn)守公共秩序（obey public rules），-共創(chuàng)良好公共環(huán)境．

不良行為	●spit（吐痰） here and there ●play with public facilities（設(shè)備）
文明行為	校內(nèi)	●圖書館：保持安靜；及時(shí)歸還圖書． ●食堂（canteen）：排隊(duì)等候；不浪費(fèi)食物． ●教室：不再課桌上涂畫；不追逐打鬧．
	校外	●馬路上：… ●公園里：…

要求：
1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適發(fā)揮．
2．自擬至少兩點(diǎn)對(duì)校外文明行為的倡議，不重復(fù)所給信息．
3．文章不少于90詞，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總同數(shù)-
4．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整．
5．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think each of us should develop good behaviour我認(rèn)為我們每個(gè)人應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成好的行為習(xí)慣．
think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

【高分句型二】
the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have我們做的努力越多，我們就會(huì)有更好的公共場(chǎng)所．
the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)：越…就越…

解答 My dear friends．
Each of us has the duty to obey public rules．Let's say no to the bad behaviour．Now．we can still see some people spit here and there．Sometimes，naughty children play with public facilities．Besides，a few people say bad words at cach other．（不良行為）
I think each of us should develop good behaviour．【高分句型一】In the school library，we should keep quiet．We should also return the books in time．In the canteen，we should wait in line．We'd better not waste any food．In the classroom，we mustn't write or draw on our desks．You know，it's dangerous to run after cach other or fight with others．
We need to obey public rules outside the school as well．When we cross a road，please wait for the green light．While we are enjoying ourselves in the park，remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there．（文明行為）
Finally，I'd like to say，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．【高分句型二】
Zhang Tao

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