Question

1．今年春季，我國西南大部分地區(qū)因為干旱嚴(yán)重缺水，2000多萬人遇到飲水難題．學(xué)校要求每位學(xué)生，伸出援助之手幫助他們．現(xiàn)在請你以班長的名義寫一份倡議書，內(nèi)容要點如下：
現(xiàn)狀1．很長時間沒有下雨
2．人們喝不到干凈的飲用水
3．植物都枯死了
活動目的
1．號召人們節(jié)約用水
2．保護環(huán)境，預(yù)防自然災(zāi)害
呼吁我們應(yīng)該做一些力所能及的事情去幫助他們，比如每人捐一瓶水，…（請自擬內(nèi)容）
注意：詞數(shù)90左右．文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear students，
This spring，most parts in the southwest of China are short of water．It is difficult for more than 20，000，000people to drink water．The people there don't have enough clean drinking water to drink because it hasn't rained for a long time．What's worse，a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water．I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment．We should take actions to prevent natural disaster．Now so many people in Yunnan and some other provinces are in difficulty．I think we should try our best to help them．We can donate bottles of drinking water to them．We can also raise money for them to help them dig more wells．In a word，let's stretch our helping hands to help those in need．
Thanks for your joining!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：What's worse，a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water．更糟糕的是，大量的野生動植物由于水的缺乏而死亡．What's worse更糟糕的是．a(chǎn) great number of+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，后面的謂語用復(fù)數(shù)．because of因為，后跟名詞、動名詞或代詞．lack of缺少…，這里的lack是名詞．
句型二：I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment．我很震驚，希望世界各地的人們能節(jié)約用水，保護我們的環(huán)境．這里是so…that"如此…以致于…"引導(dǎo)的結(jié)構(gòu)狀語從句．so修飾形容詞．a(chǎn)round the world世界各地的人們．save water節(jié)約用水．protect our environment保護我們的環(huán)境．a(chǎn)nd連接并列成分．

解答 Dear students，
This spring，most parts in the southwest of China are short of water．It is difficult for more than 20，000，000people to drink water．（事件）The people there don't have enough clean drinking water to drink because it hasn't rained for a long time．（缺少原因）What's worse，a great number of wild animals and plants die because of lack of water．【高分句型一】I am so shocked that I hope people around the world can save water and protect our environment．【高分句型二】（提倡）We should take action to prevent natural disaster．Now so many people in Yunnan and some other provinces are in difficulty．I think we should try our best to help them．（建議）We can donate bottles of drinking water to them．We can also raise money for them to help them dig more wells．（捐水或錢）In a word，let's stretch our helping hands to help those in need．（倡議）
Thanks for your joining!

點評 寫作時要明確要點，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，語法正確，結(jié)合要求，注意作文題材，不要寫跑題．日常積累一些短語和詞句．