Question

【題目】書面表達 (本大題共10分)

學(xué)校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是 “對我影響最深的人”，請根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇90字左右英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對他影響最深的人。

Persons	Details
My father	1. 40多歲，充滿愛心 2. 令我驚訝的是，他已決定去世后捐贈遺體供醫(yī)學(xué)研究
Tan Dun	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地區(qū)，從小對音樂很感興趣 2. 成功地把中西方音樂融合在一起
Jackie Chan	1.已參演了近100部影片，獲得了許多獎項 2. 多年從事慈善工作（具體表現(xiàn)用1到2句話說明） 3. 被公認為是一位超級明星，受到人們高度贊揚

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

Answer 1

【答案】

My father is in his forties. He has a heart full of love. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.

Tan Dun was born in central Hunan, China. When he was very young, Tan showed an interest in Music. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. He has spent many years doing charity work. He often donates much money to help poor people. He is considered as a super star and is thought highly of by many people.

【解析】

試題分析： 這是一篇提綱類作文。題目中已經(jīng)明確了寫作的主題和要點。作文中一定要包含表格中所列的要點，而且可以適當補充，不能簡單的逐字逐句翻譯，而應(yīng)該將它們有機地組織在一起。另外，注意文章的時態(tài)，要根據(jù)實際情況來使用正確的時態(tài)。

寫作亮點：這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點齊全，表達準確流利，是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。文章中能夠準確使用多種時態(tài)，包括一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時等。該篇作文使用了很多短語，例如To my surprise讓我吃驚的是；showed an interest in對……表現(xiàn)興趣；spent many years doing花時間做某事；is considered as被認為是；等等。